Two independent clauses fused with no punctuation. A run-on.
Sentence Combining
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Run-on: two sentences with no punctuation
A run-on (a fused sentence) runs two independent clauses together with no punctuation and no joining word. Because each clause is complete on its own, the reader loses the boundary between the two thoughts. Fix it by joining the clauses correctly or by writing two sentences.
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Theexperimentfailedtheteamlearnedalesson.
Two independent clauses fused with no punctuation. A run-on.
Now you try
Two complete sentences with no punctuation between them. Add a comma and a conjunction, or split them in two.
Comma splice: two sentences joined by only a comma
A comma splice joins two independent clauses with just a comma and no conjunction. A comma marks a pause, not a full join, so on its own it cannot connect two complete thoughts. Add a coordinating conjunction after the comma, or use a semicolon or a period.
On the line
Theexperimentfailed,theteamlearnedalesson.
Two independent clauses joined by only a comma. A comma splice.
Now you try
A comma alone cannot join two complete sentences. Add a conjunction after it, or use a period.
The fix: join the clauses the right way
There are two correct ways to join independent clauses: a comma plus a coordinating conjunction (the FANBOYS) builds a compound sentence; a subordinating conjunction makes one clause dependent and builds a complex sentence. A semicolon can also join two closely related independent clauses. Each is a real join, unlike a run-on or a comma splice.
On the line
Becausetheexperimentfailed,theteamlearnedalesson.
A subordinating conjunction joins the clauses into one complex sentence. Correct.
Now you try
A comma and a FANBOYS make a compound; a subordinator makes a complex.
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